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src/3_generators_pin.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ handle concurrency:
 I've written about green threads before. Go check out 
 [Green Threads Explained in 200 lines of Rust][greenthreads] if you're interested.
 
-Green threads uses the same mechanisms as an OS does by creating a thread for
+Green threads uses the same mechanism as an OS does by creating a thread for
 each task, setting up a stack, save the CPU's state and jump from one
 task(thread) to another by doing a "context switch".
 
@@ -36,8 +36,7 @@ such a system) which then continues running a different task.
 
 Rust had green threads once, but they were removed before it hit 1.0. The state
 of execution is stored in each stack so in such a solution there would be no need
-for `async`, `await`, `Futures` or `Pin`. All this would be implementation
+for `async`, `await`, `Futures` or `Pin`. All this would be implementation details for the library.
-details for the library.
 
 ### Combinators
 
@@ -64,8 +63,8 @@ While an effective solution there are mainly three downsides I'll focus on:
 Point #3, is actually a major drawback with `Futures 1.0`.
 
 Not allowing borrows across suspension points ends up being very
-un-ergonomic and often requiring extra allocations or copying to accomplish 
+un-ergonomic and to accomplish some tasks it requires extra allocations or
-some tasks which is inefficient.
+copying which is inefficient.
 
 The reason for the higher than optimal memory usage is that this is basically
 a callback-based approach, where each closure stores all the data it needs
@@ -94,10 +93,10 @@ async fn myfn() {
 }
 ```
 
-Generators are implemented as state machines. The memory footprint of a chain 
+Generators in Rust are implemented as state machines. The memory footprint of a
-of computations is only defined by the largest footprint any single step 
+chain of computations is only defined by the largest footprint of any single
-requires. That means that adding steps to a chain of computations might not 
+step require. That means that adding steps to a chain of computations might not
-require any added memory at all.
+require any increased memory at all.
 
 ## How generators work
 
@@ -380,8 +379,8 @@ to both possible undefined behavior and other memory errors while using just saf
 Rust. This is a big problem!
 
 But now, let's prevent the segfault from happening using `Pin`. We'll discuss
-`Pin` more below, but you'll get an introduction here by just reading the
+`Pin` more in the next chapter, but you'll get an introduction here by just
-comments.
+reading the comments.
 
 ```rust,editable
 #![feature(optin_builtin_traits)]
@@ -394,11 +393,11 @@ pub fn main() {
     // std::mem::swap(&mut gen, &mut gen2);
 
     // constructing a `Pin::new()` on a type which does not implement `Unpin` is unsafe.
-    // However, as I mentioned in the start of the next chapter about `Pin` a
+    // However, as you'll see in the start of the next chapter value pinned to
-    // boxed type automatically implements `Unpin` so to stay in safe Rust we can use 
+    // heap can be constructed while staying in safe Rust so we can use
-    // that to avoid unsafe. You can also use crates like `pin_utils` to do this safely, 
+    // that to avoid unsafe. You can also use crates like `pin_utils` to do 
-    // just remember that they use unsafe under the hood so it's like using an already-reviewed 
+    // this safely, just remember that they use unsafe under the hood so it's 
-    // unsafe implementation.
+    // like using an already-reviewed unsafe implementation.
 
     let mut pinned1 = Box::pin(gen1);
     let mut pinned2 = Box::pin(gen2);